Hey I'll try and not turn this is into a paragraph but this story made my entire night. Your writitng and what you put Cythia through was so fcking hot it literally made my stomach swim. Seriously I fell out of breath reding that, that not even an exaggeration.

The scenario you can up with is so visceral and clever, not to mention how well written these charachters are for such a racy short story, you captured a side of cynthia thats beleivable and that made me go nuts for the character now that I have read this. Especially when you cut to the few days later it got soo juicy, like im lost for words!

I used to enjoy fanfiction and then I stopped reading them but this reminded me just how crazy hot they can be if done right and this has convinced me to start reading again... Seriosly I feel like this is my favorite one yet! You are frighteningly talented at this and I really sicerely hope you make more stories like this again, I'll be there day 1 to read them if you do!